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therodoggswifetherodoggswifeover 16 years ago
enjoyed

great story write more

KathykittenKathykittenalmost 16 years ago
Good start, little to unrealistic end

Started off good, but got a little to groose in the end. But that's just personal taste of course :) One pointer I could give is that it would probably be impossible for anyone to hold an entire cuke up the rear for that long, not to mention how it would have dried inn and really damaged the sweet girl.

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