All Comments on 'Grocery Store Girl Ch. 01'

Great build in the friendship and fantastic birthday ending. Bring on chapter 2.

The story is great. The ass licking is fantasy. Licking from pussy to ass and back again can cause problems. Wish I had the guts to do that in real life. Also, mouth cleaning after a meal is a necessary fact. Mouth washing after fucking and eating is a necessary part of life. Love the wash cloth part. You get that in some countries as a normal part of sex, especially with a prostitute.

Can't wait for more chapters. The best stories are the ones like this that provide the mental pictures as you read!

LOVED IT ~ CAN`T WAIT FOR PART TWO !

Don't bother with more. Please.

Well written with a nice build on their friendship. Nice exit, leaving your readers hanging, waiting on chapter 2. Nice work!!!

Great chapter, can't wait for sequel. Keep it up please.

Ok....lets get on with it....please...Im anxiously, as are we all, awaiting the next chapter. Sooner the better....

Keep it going!

I read this story at least a year ago and have spent about half an hour looking for it again via the index It is fabulously sexy and gorgeous. A rivetting read, a lucky man and a fortunate young lady too. lucky because he never expected it, fortunate because she is with a gentle man who relishes fucking her without being rough or opportunistic. Both wanting it to go on.

As an older man who loves small young women, I loved every bit of this story! I cannot wait for the next chapter! I guess I will have to do so anyway!!!!

Brad Garrett needs to write more stories.