by sexgundam666
Well, that was extraordinarily sexy. A nice build up, too. Great work!
I never comment on this kind of writing, but this story starts out a cut above. The plausible setup (no magic or wacky sci-fi), the thoughtful, anatomically accurate descriptions, and the balance of physicality with persons and relationships keeps it from coming across as juvenile or smutty. It has me wanting rather than needing to read more. Great cliffhanger conclusion!