All Comments on 'Growing Needs Ch. 03'

Awesome stuff. The build up was really good. You got across Mia's growing arousal very well. The sex was something else, though. It's almost as if something mystical is happening between Mia and Annie. Very powerful.

You have justified my assessment of 'Auspicious' ! Good, consistent characterization, actual story, realism in both anatomy and relationships (well, except for the second copulation in ch 2; medically Annie would have died from internal hemmoraging), very good pacing. Excellent believable dialouge - especially the chat conversation! Never seen that done before. This story has me as attracted as Annie ( ;) ), subtle but inevitable.

I'm really hooked on this story at this point. I've got a lot to read, but looking forward to all of it!