by englander1961
Well done Susan. I enjoyed this story very much.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I like the way you word yer sentences! Its a far cry from the all-to-familiar ramblings of alotta stories here on Lit! Ya sure kept reminding the ole man about mommy and uncle charles tho. lol I'm lookin forward to yer next chapter!
A beautifully written story; colorful and descriptive. The author is a true artist!
My words can not adequately express the feelings I experienced while reading – thank you Susan. The “rest-of-the-story” is anxiously awaited. GranPa
Alot of psychology and thinking. Both cheat and have to deal with the consequences of their cheating. Doug at least seems to understand what he's done.
It has to be one of the best storys i have read in here. A real turn on And it reads like it could happen, that makes it all the better.
A great story, keep up the good work!There's nothing the fucking only a father can give his daughter. That's why, incest is best. I know, been there and done that. there's nothing like my father's love tool routing around inside my pussy. the only thing I like better is his tongue!Thank you for helping me relive old times.
I love this series so much. My father caught me reading this, and soon after we began fulfilling some of the fantasies. Please write more stories, this is the best one I've ever read