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Mistress_CanadaMistress_Canadaover 13 years ago
Is it possible for you to write a bad story?

So regularly, I am so entertained by your writing. How can you be this consistently good?

Bob's seduction of Craig feels very real; As a reader, I could believe the evolution from two guys with cars in common to lovers, and then ultimately, to partners.

The fourth paragraph from the end, I think it should have been "Craig struggled and fought him, but...". Anyhow, one small typo doesn't keep this from being a 5 star piece of writing.

forfun44forfun44over 13 years ago
Very Hot!!

Well written! You know how to create a real studdly stud!

CarelessLoveCarelessLoveover 13 years ago
Awesome story.

Your story was so good that I smiled through the whole thing. I loved it. You write so wonderfully. It really captivated my attention. Awesome job.

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
Another perfect story

Guess that's all I have to say...it's just perfect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story!

I've read this story several times already. Interesting characters, nice writing style and good build-up. Great ending. Loved it. One of my favorite stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Brittany

I loved that it's sweet.

DomXianDomXianabout 9 years ago
Awww

I was definitely not expecting that but I really love the ending! Great story! 5 Stars!

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...

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