All Comments on 'Guarding Emma Watson Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Super hot

Super hot story!

I'love to read more about miss Watson and miss Wright, especially how they team up to give the perfect pleasure, maybe even Emma finds it hot to be dominant for a short period.

And I especially liked how Emma easily made Bonnie cum as she wanted to, it seems that Emma is really creative if she needs to be.

Regards

Reader

SamoaJohnSamoaJohnabout 9 years ago
Awesome

So well done. Bonnie Wright getting in on it was fun as well. Can't wait for more. Fantastic work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great Chapter

This was so well written, I like how you were able to write it so that it was clear that Bonnie and Emma had fooled around before. I'm looking foward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good

Good history please keep it like this. Im dying for the next chapter and to read Bonnie and Emma gettiing their asses fuck

valvovalvoabout 9 years ago
Good chapter

I loved the chapter, however, I feel like you brought Bonnie into the mix way to soon. Emma and Pete started this relationship a few days ago and Bonnie is already completely in the know and participating. In my opinion, it should have happened weeks or months down the road. This just seems to be quite rushed. That's really my only complaint. Love how nasty Emma is getting and I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good Chapter

I enjoyed this chapter but as previously mentioned I thought it was a little too early to flesh out the Emma/Bonnie/Pete dynamic for such a new relationship. I like the idea of Bonnie getting in on the arrangement - I just would have saved that for a later chapter. However, with that being said I really enjoy your writing style. I am looking forward to reading subsequent chapters on the growing "relationship" between Pete and Emma. (Is it love? Is it lust? You know what I mean...) I thought adding the upcoming wedding to the plot was clever. I think you should focus on Emma and Pete more for at least another chapter or two before going back to the Bonnie plot line. Now get writing! Cheers, T

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Padahpahpahpahhh i'm lovin' it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Is there any news as to when you will release the newest section. I REALLY want to see what happens next :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome!! Can't wait for next one!!!

Awesome story. Two question. When will the next one be out and could you incorporate some love bondage in it. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Elsa

Waw! Really blown away by your writing skills. You made a women smile today. Keep up the good work ;-)

sarah_siddonssarah_siddonsalmost 8 years ago
Still waiting

Where's chapter 4 ????

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Super fucking hot

So fucking outrageously hot and depraved, wonderful all three of them totally drunk on cum. Love the electric toy's. I adore cunt and love to get drunk on the nectar it produces. My two live in fuck buddies and I almost fucked and sucked each other to death, more and more like this please, and soon, like yesterday. Pussy lapping sex maniac lanc's uk.

InsertCleverNameInsertCleverNameover 7 years ago
Great!

Loving this storyline! Hoping for a part 4 soon! :D

DucaDiVizziniDucaDiVizziniabout 7 years ago
Superb!

You are a splendid writer---of course it helps enormously that we all love Emma and can easily imagine the visuals, but you do it all so well--Congrats-a good read (Wonder if Emma herself ever read it) Well done!!

DucaDiVizziniDucaDiVizziniabout 7 years ago
Suggestion about.......

This was, as I have said a really great read. Sasha Gray is classy enough and young enough ----and actually smart enough---to be a character of interest (just a suggestion) I didn't want to hijack your excellent story, but I've seen Sasha doing damn near anything imaginable , and, well....

ThaliaForliThaliaForlialmost 7 years ago

Loved the story. I'm kinda into the same stuff that was written here. My boyfriend is the dominant one and I'm more the submissive. Great story. Would love to read more.

MrChubbyMrChubbyover 5 years ago
More Please

One of my favorite Emma stories here.

Please write a few more chapters.

RazzakelRazzakelover 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this story and really hope it continues one day!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hermione and Ginny, WOW

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