All Comments on 'Guess: The Ultimate Sex Game'

Please continue.

Hope it will be NonConsent :)

Waiting now for next story , to see what the next challengers will be.

Sure there will be some arse fucking

Cant wait for part 2!

Great story so far. I hope Danielle maintains some level of reluctance throughout, and that maybe she ends up having to submit to Peter for the full hour. Keep up the good work!

She is in heaven... Peter is a dweeb unworthy of her. Her anal cherry is her last frontier... a bit of reluctance and finish with a triple play and bingo!

Please don't be as predictable as the previous comment. Make Danielle have a moment of shame as she comes down from this orgasm, renewing her reluctance. Maybe have her perform with the other girls, with them wearing strap-ons. Whatever you do, I can't wait for the next chapter. Any update on when it might be?

too emotional, to sympathetic with her to find this at all erotic. Peter is a bully pretending to be an alpha a prick deserving some severe punishment for his misogynistic behavior

I couldn't get past the blindfolds on the first page. This girl was a wimp who let people bully her. If Stacy were truly Danielle's friend she would have recognized Danielle's discomfort and not let others bully her.

So, its physically stimulating, but she is still being bullied and gang raped. I hope she takes a lead pipe to Stacy the next day, right after she gets a morning after pill.

OK, So with morbid curiosity I got through this chapter. She made me think of a kid who brought his meager life's savings to a poker game with professional players. Danielle was a lamb being led to slaughter

OK, So with morbid curiosity I got through this chapter. She made me think of a kid who brought his meager life's savings to a poker game with professional players. Danielle was a lamb being led to slaughter.

Good story although I do agree both Danielle and Peter annoy me quite a bit at times. It's well written on the other hand. On page three (I think) it mentions anthropologists studying mating rituals of animals or something like that. I could be wrong but I believe anthropology is the study of human cultures and such. Like I said, I could be wrong, but it is something you might want to check and get fixed. Looking forward to more!

This is the best story I've seen on the site. The fictitious game is interesting enough that I think people could have some real fun with it, in real life. The writing was excellent, and I was never slowed down by typos or poor grammar. Loved the reluctance but ability to plunge ahead and enjoy herself. Love that Peter's a prick, because "hate sex" is damn good sex. I could do without the flash backs about old boyfriends, but appreciate this technique of establishing motivations in writing other than erotica. Overall, written like a true writer. I'd go so far as to say that BobRobertson's day job is actually a writer. :)

This is fucking fantastic, makes me wish I was young and single to where I could play that game

What a story dude.... Great... Please keep on writing

Loved it!

Suggestion: a bit more sophisticated way of convincing Danielle to join the game. Amazing story.