by ErotickWriter
This was the best-written story I've ever read on this site. No spelling errors or grammatical goofs to distract from the eroticism. Made my almost 70-year old dick hard as it has been in a while. It really intensified my lust for a hot and sexy 50-year old whose pants I've been trying to get into. The description of the young lady here reminded me of my sexy friend. I hope I can be as successful with her as Tony was with Kelly. Truly inspirational!
Very refreshing to read a well-written story with incredible detail and no spelling/grammatical errors to cheapen the flow! Not to mention your plots are inspiring and original! Please keep up the great work!
Excellent writing, every guys fantasy written in such a way, to tease and please, with a hottie that is eager to please, and be pleased. Good Stuff...!
A very vivid description of some very hot oral sessions! I totally liked it!
How did your Wife like your urban pictures, hell I want to see them. Your Wife, the one who casually mentioned Kelly, the girl you were out with, has a crush on you.
I hope you are able to tell us what happens to you next.
Your still my hero