All Comments on 'Guess What I Saw?'

very nice, hope there is part 2 and many more to come!

Right amount of angst, tease, guilt, sex. Looking forward to the next part.

I truly felt as if I were feeling the pain and excitement first hand. It's every older guys fantasy to have a young sweetie desire him, but fantasy verses reality can be two different things. Which your story told perfectly. Look forward to the next installment.

So hot! The desire...

Your ' first submission ' ?? Well done, that was excellent THANK YOU.

I really really love this. Mr Macs character is so great - i love that you havent made him into the type to just go raping that teenage girl since she showed some interest, and that he felt sorry and ashamed of being caught by a girl he'd known since she was little. It made the whole thing seem more real and so it had a much better build up to the sex part (which was also super hot by the way :) )

Wow I was shaking. Kelly is so perfect. Wow.

Dude your screwed, do you remember hearing this,

"I know you and I can't be together forever. But,", Dude your a Perv. I do like where Kelly, you and this story is Head ed

You are a fantastic story teller.