by TheRaz0r
Not just one or two; but every fucking one of them and that makes this story so idiotic that I can feel my iq dropping just by reading it.
Everything was great but you really jumped the shark in this one. The stories before were at least semi believable, but you just went full fan fiction.
These stories are great! (Or maybe it's just that my name happens to be Dylan)
Don't listen to the Anon who said that your stories aren't believable because everyone is so ready to throw themselves at the story's Dylan. If they weren't, the sex in the stories would have been delayed by 5 pages. That anon is just feeling bad about how non-existent his sex life probably is.
Keep writing these!