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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Enjoying the story line but you need an editor

The story line and little bits of back story are good. You really need to get an editor though. Mixing of he and she in the same sentence and other errors makes it a bit confusing to read at times

TempestBainTempestBainalmost 10 years ago
Continue

Enjoying the story but need more of this and zombies please continue with it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Loved it

I was Wondering if you could continue with this story. I loved it. and could you possible make each story a bit longer? 10/10. PLEASE continue it.

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