All Comments on 'Guilt'

Gr8

this is good. but so sad :(

I hope you'll continue it. I check now and then hoping to find a new chapter

Hope you'll be posting it soon :-)

I've actually never come across a story quite like yours. I'm either blind or nothing else has ever seemed as interesting as this. I'd like to see where you go with this it's great and I love how you write

Of course Caleb is an asshole, he is the antagonist of the story, not the protagonist =D

Loved it , hope there's another part

Don't like Caleb as your protagonist.... There is difference between being a bad boy and being an asshole. Caleb is the latter. Stick with Red Cloak.

Interesting so far....hope you continue but it can stand its own too.

Please continue this. You've intrigued me and I want to learn more!