All Comments on 'Gwennalyn's Sexual Awakening Ch. 08'

Should do a series of Deiara without Gwennalyn. The descriptions of Deiara's body and personality sound really sexy.

I think that you should begin writing chapters about Gwennalyn getting pregnant by the brothers and then trying to hide the pregnancy and eventual birth from her parents. That seems like the natural progression of the story. I mean,.... All this sex is great and wonderfully written. But I really think it should eventually go some where.

Great writing, hope that you continue with the story.

No pregnancy, please. It's already mentioned in the story that she's on whatever that world has for birth control. Please keep the pregnancy fetish out of this series!

Very nice story.

I'll agree with keeping pregnancy out of the scene, though. On a world like this, there's no way to hide it and it would ruin the "realism" if you do something so blatant. As it is, everything's happening in secret and is believable.

By far the sexiest, most erotic part, for me, is seeing the psychological changes in the princess. This latest chapter was the hottest because she finally seems to have been broken You did a good job of showing that change in mental state and I'm very much looking forward to seeing how her relationship with the orcs and her handmaid changes. I'd like to see her maid take a more dominant role when they're alone, too.