All Comments on 'Gwen's Journey Ch. 02'

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Eric_Shift over 14 years ago

Of course I want more.

I like the direction. Are Steve and Gabby cops? Is blue eyes a crim? Just how sexy is Gabby? You know all the really Important things.

dyonysos over 9 years ago

though i like the story so far "romance" doesn't seem the right place to publish it

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