All Comments on 'Gwen's Journey Ch. 07'

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Eric_Shift over 14 years ago

No need to be smart

OK I beg that you dont write that Ronnie dies. I Hope thats concise enough. If Ronnie dies Gwen has no chance for redemption

roadbird over 14 years ago

no true vote till

sergie and the butcher is killed and all the women saved ...if that dont happen then this shit ass story gets a 0

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Hilarious

What a fucked up operation full of nutcases! I laughed my ass off; it's like watching a teeny horror flick. You just know if they don't do the stupid things they do there wouldn't be a movie at all. Just don't stall too long to continue or I won't remember why I was even interested in the beginning. Christ!

Anonymousover 14 years ago

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"away from computers" and still posting supermarket? You lying bitch.

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