All Comments on 'Gwen's Journey Ch. 08'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Like I said before...

As long as the crims die and Ronnie, Gwen, Gabby, and Steve live I'll be happy

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Shouldn't this chapter be NonConsent/Reluctance?

I'll definitely finish reading this story as the next chapter(s?) are written, but it sure has taken a nasty turn. My opinion of Gwen and Steve has definitely fallen over the course of the story. They can both be impulsive and don't always consider how their actions will affect others. They're not totally bad people - they do care about their friends and each other. Hope they end up together (they deserve each other, heh) but I won't be too upset if they both die. On the other hand, please don't kill Gabrielle and Ronnie - they didn't deserve to get sucked into this mess by Steve and Gwen and I'll be really mad at you if they die :P

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