All Comments on 'Gypsy Designs Ch. 06'

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knightofheartsknightofheartsover 15 years ago
Impressive

Excellent addition. Nice to see the separating of the scenes. Keep it up.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Nice job!

Nicely edited. A few mistakes still, but I can overlook a few! Love these characters and the way the story is developing. Thanks for posting so quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Anticipation is driving me nuts!

oh man, the only thing that saves me from the fact that they STILL haven't done it is that you're posting each day. Thank you thank you, great story.

skadetskadetover 15 years ago
I love it!

Please, keep it coming! You're amazing :D

LapistearLapistearover 15 years ago
Love to see regular posts

I don't know how you're managing to post a chapter everyday, but thank you for the speed. It's so much easier to follow the story this way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I like this story

But I am starting to not like Gypsy. She keeps pushing him to the edge and she seems to be very aware of it. She's a tease. If I were him I think I'd get pissed and drop her. And I am not even a man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ARGH!!!!

Why won't they just fuck for gods sake??????!!!!!!! I'm getting so frustrated! And by the sounds of it so is Cadyn. He should just stop asking her if she wants to stop and bloody get on with the job! :@

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
the best Literotic story I Have read

this series is as good as Lesat the Vampire

TheRaven426TheRaven426over 11 years ago
Please

For the love of.... Please don't leave me hanging like that. Finish the series. I beg of you.

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