by I_Shadow
Excellent addition. Nice to see the separating of the scenes. Keep it up.
Nicely edited. A few mistakes still, but I can overlook a few! Love these characters and the way the story is developing. Thanks for posting so quickly!
oh man, the only thing that saves me from the fact that they STILL haven't done it is that you're posting each day. Thank you thank you, great story.
I don't know how you're managing to post a chapter everyday, but thank you for the speed. It's so much easier to follow the story this way.
But I am starting to not like Gypsy. She keeps pushing him to the edge and she seems to be very aware of it. She's a tease. If I were him I think I'd get pissed and drop her. And I am not even a man.
Why won't they just fuck for gods sake??????!!!!!!! I'm getting so frustrated! And by the sounds of it so is Cadyn. He should just stop asking her if she wants to stop and bloody get on with the job! :@
this series is as good as Lesat the Vampire
For the love of.... Please don't leave me hanging like that. Finish the series. I beg of you.