All Comments on 'Gypsy Dreams Ch. 02'

by Jenna Grey

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Please Keep it going

I would love to see more of this story.

Jenna GreyJenna Greyabout 19 years agoAuthor
Many Thanks!

Thank you for taking the time to vote and comment. It's been difficult for me to write lately, but for some reason your comment woke me up. I originally intended this story to be three parts, but I didn't have the heart to end it there. Pt. 3 has been submitted, keep your eyes open for it. And 4 is in the works.

Thanks again.

JG

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
writers block?

we all have it and sometimes no or negative feedback is the reason. So there'll be none here. ITs a most interesting twist, well imagined, can we see more of the charectors interacting? more of them in their working lives? All we know is their names, that they live alone one is a journalist that they seem to share a common dream. Kipling wrote a short story (not erotic - not his style or time i suppose) of a couple sharing a dream.

Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
dig it

awesome twist!

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