All Comments on 'Gyrations'

Your writing is a teeny bit stiled, and a tad too fast-paced, skipping over some nuance but gewttting a lot of color in the process.

But your subject matter, your multiple twists & turns, and the heart-wrenching situation was delivered beleivably to the point that I teared up when she said she hoped to have a baby.

Being in the transgendered community myself (as an observer more than a participant - my boyfriend dresses), these thoughts and feelings were well and compassionatly delivered without being preachy, smarmy or needlessly vulgar.

Good job!

Oh, and this sentence? PRICELESS!

"Nothing's that simple," I said. "You're a cross-dressing fag with a gorgeous figure and I'm a closet homosexual asking you for sex. Simple doesn't exist for us."