All Comments on 'Hailey'

Very moving in its intensity. The tensions are wonderfully resolved in the deep level of intimacy attained by the lovers/siblings. The German author's mastery of English is quite impressive.

You write a nice visual discription of the love making between the brother and sister. I wonder though if you had anyone proof read, spell check or help with your grammer, especially the use of past and presence tence. Keep writing and try to get rid of those awkward sentence structures that I found in your story. Keep working on that and you will have four star boner story for all of us to read. Thanks for the great incest vision! Barb

Loved the story.

Can't wait to hear future stories.

Triggered some of my pleasant memories, maybe I should share it with you all. I'll think it over, before I post.

Palimbasha

im not into the whole incest stuff,but i loved your story. me and my frineds were reading it together and we all got really horny and had a big orgy!!!! thanks lol

Suggest that you make a study of female anatomy

Great story. Fuck grammar and spelling, I loved it just the way it was. The over all plot was amazing, you did a wonderful job. Bravo.

I never leave comments, but I couldn't resist this time. This story was amazing! You did such a great job! By the way, I think that it's quite humorous that the person who put down your spelling and grammar spelled it "grammer"...

i loved it,

its both romantic and sexy,

please make a sequel!

wow, makes me wish I was Hailey's brother, if I was him I would be a really happy man.

A strange mixture of love and brutality, but some people respond to that. I don't.

I found the story to be tender and loving. No brutality that I could see. Big brother Caleb loves his kid sister Hailey, loves everything about her, especially her adorable little coochie. He gets real hard and maneuvers his big stiff prick up between his sister's legs--oops! Caleb didn't know little sis was a virgin, and he's busted her cherry. But it had to get busted sometime, and it's best if it's done by someone who loves and cares for her, like Caleb. It turns out, though, that Hailey really digs Caleb getting his fat hard cock up her cute little cunt and blowing his brotherly balls in her sisterly twat. Big brother and his little sis have years of hot incestuous fucks ahead of them.

@@@..lol, he's pretty much a big douche! She says wait, he lies and says he can't and just rapes her, says he didn't mean to hurt her but he obviously did and didn't care, even where I'm reading now he's squeezing her tits hard, something most women hate, especially not asking first! @@@

She started enjoying the feeling deep inside her as he kept giving his sister´s little snatch the first fuck she ever had. He did it nice and rough, unable to take it slow for her for he had never wanted to fuck anyone this bad before.

@@@ Gawd, I hate it when people use some lame ass copout excuse to do what they want! @@@

I´ll make you cum now, fingering you. But after that I must fuck you again for all you´re worth so my prick stops hurting with my desire for you.

. Do you think you can bear that or will it hurt too much? Because if it does, I´ll have to go now, I can´t take any more holding back

@@@ ...that has got to be the lamest fucking bullshit line that I've ever heard! ROFL!! Dude is just sad ass pathetic!! Lol. @@@

Trust me now," he said.

@@@ Yes, trust the rapist who ignored you when you told him to wait, lol. @@@

I won´t ever use you. I might use your body if I can´t hold back, but I won´t ever break your heart or leave you, I promise."

@@@ ...does he even listen to what he's saying?!? Omg!! @@@

hey were loud and they did not even notice.

@@@ They will when the parents show up, lol! I always get a kick out of reading that in stories, like its hard to be quiet, lol. @@@

"We´ve fucked raw."

@@@ Ya think? Lolz! Hope she didn't catch anything from him!! ;) @@@

Well, that was different, heh!

YUK! I like a woman that looks like a woman, not a 6 yr old. GROSS!