All Comments on 'Hailey's Story Ch. 02'

Icky

I got so wet when I red this, I wish it was me in the story.

Can´t wait for the next instalment in Hailey´s new life

I just got off to this on my mother in law's sofa. Everyone is asleep except my husband and I. He's in the shower. I got SOOO turned on by this. I bet Miss Hailey is a sexy lil thing!!! I can't wait for more from you. So excited!!!

I wish my dom would be that way with me! :(

Please write more

A slave who doesn't need feeding drink or bathroom is very useful to own

You've done good job introducing the characters. I would suggest a little more proofreading. Looking forward to the next part.

Enjoyable story. A bit more proofreading and a bit less use of "sweetie" would be good.

Kinky story, but yes -- needs more proofreading, and definitely more parts. Hailey's just getting started.