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5thRing5thRingover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks to Almasiempre11...

for being a sounding board while I developed the story.

Also, FYI, there are only 2 more installments. Day 3 & 4 are the last one.

And the next 2 installments are considerably longer than this one, if that is a concern for you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow! Great story so far

And it sounds like an all too common situation: girl friendzones the nice guy and finds out too late that the nice guys are the ones you want.

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I love getting comments on my stories. I like honest CONSTRUCTIVE critiques: what SPECIFICALLY you liked and disliked. I'm seeking ways to improve because even I am not satisfied with my own work. Simply saying that you didn't like it is not helpful, at all. I have just su...

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