All Comments on 'Halloween Aboard The Interloper'

by Mark_Ilaan

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Pirate TregarePirate Tregareover 15 years ago
"Scenic" !

Holy crap was that well-written!

You painted a picture of every scene! I could "see" what was happening at all times. The dialogue was believeable and conversational, not the stilted type of lines normally found here.

Idon't recognize your name, but I hope you have more stuff here I can read!

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
The Perfect Fantasy

Lucky Cindy! Alex is a dream. And you are an exceptional writer! I was right there with them and saw and smelled and felt everything. Sigh. I love pirates!

SweetWitchSweetWitchover 15 years ago
Hot

Wonderful work, Mark. I just love intrigue on the tropical seas.

submisive_slut_wifesubmisive_slut_wifeover 15 years ago
fantastic

i love this story

just the right mix of hot sex and romance

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
wow!

what a perfect little story!

Emperor_NeroEmperor_Neroover 15 years ago
Nice job

Nice job Mark ... Good luck in the contest

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