All Comments on 'Halloween Masquerade'

Really liked how you seduced him without the wife going too far the first time, is there more chapters coming where he will ask her to be with other men and women and maybe even go too far eventually...but yet still remain in love?

I can't wait for this to progress where the husband is in bed and gets to watch very close up while another man fucks his wife.

She should have gotten Steve off before she left. I don't like people who use other people. Sure he got to play, but when push came to shove so to speak she left him high and dry. Very Rude.

I like loving wives stories. But soft swing is the safest, more realistic type of story. I did some editing (taking out F words and fixing spelling and adjusted the perspective of the speaker a little). I only did it for my wife to read. I would be happy to email it to you to see if it reads any better in your opinion.

Keep up the good work.

Jim

jimbo@usa.com

Until I read "he had shaved his pubic hair." Then I knew the story was written by a queer and that was such a huge turn off that I rated it 1*.

Terrific, believable characters, and sexy scenarios. My one quibble is the way you change the voice from time to time. Why not let Gina narrate the whole thing? Quibbles aside, however, a good, hot story. Many thanks,

Q

Bad rendition of a fifth rate stroke story !

Wife should have let the guy fuck her her husband would have let her

She fulfils his fantasy & rekindles their marriage...nope. Factually THEY rekindled some divorce lawyers bank account.

Sorry even the pathetic little dicked liars cant make this seem "realistic" hell they cant even get it to have one foot on "good".

Wow, some negative comments. Most don't have the balls to leave their name. I thought it was well written, but I agree with the comment about changing the point of view. I also agree that she should have gotten Steve off. I gave 4*s