by Kansas
Your story as with your others was a total enjoyment! Can't wait for more from you!! Thank you!
If you're going to write - and get off on - lesbian porn, at least speak respectfully about us, rather than referring to us as "creepy." FOH.
There is real school named Willamette University in Oregon near the Willamette River, but it is coed.
This story is a first-person narrative. If Claire believes that some of the girls (not ALL of the girls, only SOME) on the Willamette basketball team are "creepy," is it wrong for her to say so? Does that cross some kind of unwritten line? Is basketball now considered sacrosanct?
Very nice story.
Love your writing.
Thank you.
PS: swimmer are nicer than basket ball player... that's well known ; )
I love it, and hope you'll follow it up with more!
Thank you!
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I hope you decide to write more about Claire's 4 years at Willamette.....
it did not get me off, but I read the whole thing and was happy I did, very talented writing
Wow, very nice and very hot story! thank you for sharing it with us!
Absolutely Hot!!
I really adored this story, in which the "heat was turned on high" and there was never a "flame-out!! The party was "awesome" and quite well done, ending a perfectly written sexy Halloween Tale!!
5*-Stars In Everyway🎉!
You’re no different from the herd - lesbian authors LOVE to belittle and degrade lesbians by “giving” them small or even tiny breasts!!! As if it would matter one iota that some of the women in your story had larger breasts!!! You are much more than shallow, you’re dysfunctional as well!! I’m simply sticking up for my sister and her lesbian friends who run across your kind everyday of their lives!!!
I would love to see a follow on chapter of the continuing exploits of these women.