All Comments on 'Halloween Surprises'

by EmeraldKitten

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LunaEroticaMysticaLunaEroticaMysticaover 13 years ago

I liked the realization that they came to in the end, that they loved each other. Great job with all the party details. Lots of fun. Hot scenes all around! I am partial to "Crafting" though :) Good luck!

~Luna

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very sweet...

i liked that story more than i thought i would lol...i think i just like the way that it ended with them realizing they really love each other.

Wild1InStLWild1InStLover 13 years ago
Loved It!

I really enjoy your writing Emerald, your descriptions of everything are very vivid and a total turn on. Love the different things you have the characters do to each other and the way they react to them. I definately give it a 5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great story. I thought they might break up and it would be a sad ending but it turned out to be really sweet. =)

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