by BigCoreySKR
I don't want this to stop here. I hope the next part is already forming!
But I'll try to give some (hopefully) helpful comments on the four parts I just read:
I really liked the introduction. It didn't give a real hint as to what to expect. And I almost never experienced an explanatory part like number two. That was really good and informative at the same time.
I rally loved the developing thing between the two lovers full of possibilities for every kind of incidents in the future.
But you didn't use Grym anymore. There's a lot of potential for some drama.
I'd like to see my two personal favorite heros getting over some obstacles together.
That'd be really nice.
Thank you so far. I'll start cursing you if I have to wait to long for part 5 bit till then I praise you... ;-)