by tokyojoe27
Waste of time. No real emotion, no real involvement and no imagination at all.
I have no idea what the other commenter's issue was besides being a fucking moron... this has been a fantasy of mine for a long time and I really enjoyed this story! more please!
Thanks for the comments so far~
This was my first time writing and posting a story here, and I really appreciate the feedback. Please, anyone reading this, take a sec and let me know what you think!
I loved this story ! It was amazing how it excited her to punish her charge and how she was so looking foreward to an even more severe session. So am i. Please more!
awesome story, and well-written. you should write one with a male dom next, maybe the principal..?
Hey all~
Thanks for the comments. Again, this was my first story, and I'm glad it's (moderately) popular on this website. I've been busy with work lately, but Part 2 (and many more- I've got a lot planned for these characters) is coming in the next month or so.
Again, the comments and feedback I get (both public and private) are great, and have been motivating me to write faster.
Thanks for reading!