by JukeboxEMCSA
this was really hot, and for me the twist was actually really hot too. i wouldn't mind more chapters in this series!
This was by far one of your greatest stories. The twist used in this story was one of the best (and hottest) i’ve read in a long time. Keep up the great work.
So fuckin' hot! It's like we were on the same wavelength. I was already fantasizing about her turning the tables but I didn't expect it to actually happen and when it did...uuuhh!
Saw the twist coming from a mile away, not bad but I enjoyed the opening idea a tad more. After all while not uncommon few are the well written girl gets hypnotized story