by Daflinger
I love your writing style. What a sexy start to this story series. I would very much like to meet this guy in real life!
I am very turned on right now, your descriptions had me right there in the moment. I liked the street light illuminating her on and off as you drove, you standing with your cock in the window, denying fucking her whilst standing up.. yes yes yes please keep writing
there's more! Very sensuous...very enticing -- even if there's not 'more.' Although I hope there is...it's amazing what the ramblings and musings of a creative mind can conjure up...Thank you -- take care...
Wasn't sure I was going to like this because BDSM usually frightens me but you had me in the first paragraph...drew me in right away...your writing style is engaging and the details are first rate...Hope you write more.
Now that was so HOT and naughty! You really must bring us another chapter soon! Perhaps five stars will encourage promptness!