All Comments on 'Handyman Hank Ch. 03'

CD, you have become one of my favorite authors. I really enjoy your style, and you always offer an engaging plot and colorful characters. I often find myself skimming most stories, but yours I read word for word.

Because of that, I spotted one unfortunate typo that I know you missed through several edits, and I know will bother you until it is fixed. I've made that same mistake myself, and I know how it feels.

"Deep down in my balls the larva started to boil over and I pumped rope after rope into her wildly gyrating pussy." I'm pretty sure you meant "lava", because larva...really isn't very sexy!

Aside from that one small mistake, I have zero complaints. Well, other than the category for this story shouldn't be Loving Wives, because there is no wife. (Only an ex-wife.) And the story had nothing to do with the category's description. It belongs in the Erotic Coupling category, IMHO. But LW has always been a dumping ground for every story of every subject, so all are welcome.

Excellent job. Five stars from me.

Thanks. You are right about the larva vs lava. That was what we Rednecks down South call a Fuck-up. I'll change it just as soon as I figure out how. As far as the martial status of Bessie and Bubba goes, I obviously didn't do a very good job there. Bessie had never went to the trouble of divorcing Bubba, partly because of money and partly from fear. (I had a real couple, who remained married while he was locked up, in mind when I wrote this scenario into the story. That was the only thing they had in common with B & B.) I should have made that clearer.

Your compliments about my writing are greatly appreciated. I credit swingerjoe and AlwaysWantedTo, who has now pulled his stories off Lit, with having the most influence on my improvement. A seemingly insignificant comment here and there can make a big difference. Thanks again, guys.---- Dreamer

You say "martial status of Bessie and Bubba"

Are they at war?

Martial refers to war M A R T I A L.

Marital refers to marriage M A R I T A L.

True, in some marriages it can be hard to tell the difference.

Well, one quibble (kinda) not previously addressed (larva? gmafb!) At one point, HH admits he is of 'normal' size. In the hospital, his endowment is praised by a nurse who probably sees a shitpot fulla peckers, both peepee quiescent AND cock rampant!

I have greatly enjoyed Hank, to date. Will even tap into Taboo and Mature, looking for him ... something I just DON'T do!!!

5*

And who will save the wives from his predator behavior?

5*

Love your details and the people in your stories. They come to life before my eyes I can picture them. The sex scene where she squirted I agree that is indescribable to experience. But you still want to do it again and again. :) Keep up with the great writing. it is nice to take a trip to the south and read about Hank..

How do you get away with this Old Joe stuff? I thought it would be illegal.

I liked it -- 5 stars

I like this handyman series.Lots of humor.

Just one comment, I though labia were lips?

Good point, that's another stupid mistake on my part. Boy! Are they easy to make! Thanks for pointing it out; I'll try not to do that again. Dreamer

Thanks for sharing.

Good story but I need to read it again. I think it jumped somewhere or skipped something and my mind filled in the blank.

The Marine Recon would be more akin to the Army Rangers. The Green Berets have a totally different mission than either . Even most service members rarely have that straight. Still a 5* story!!

With best regards,

Paul