All Comments on 'Hannah's Need'

Loved it! Please write more!

A fascinating way to kick off a story! I enjoyed this very unusual tale quite a bit, and hope you plan to continue it. The sisterly attraction is very powerful, but I was also intrigued by Beth's unvoiced attraction to her mother. Can't wait to see where you take this next!

Keep going.. Very interesting start.

stench, fat old woman... just not my cup of tea

Interestingly original writing. Good characterisation. Well worth a 5.

Well there is no such thing, so does that mean you want to rape yo sista asshole?