All Comments on 'Hanson House Sequel: Amanda Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This story is utterly ridiculous. The lead character is supposedly still a virgin, despite having been fucked with all manner of things? The notion is laughably naive (who gives a shit about virginity in this day and age?) and demonstrates the author's complete obsession with cock. I had hoped for some lesbian face-sitting action (as promised by the story tags), but instead I got a load of boring, male-centric, phallo-obsessive d/s nonsense. Heterosexual d/s and male dominance is so boring and unimaginative! Wow, you have a penis. So do half the rest of the people on the planet. Big fucking deal!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pregnancy for Amanda!

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Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...

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