All Comments on 'Happy Anniversary'

by __Lisa__

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__Lisa____Lisa__over 12 years agoAuthor
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I'd love your feedback on this story. It's the first one I've been able to complete after more than a year's break, so please forgive me if I'm a little rusty. Your constructive criticism would be much appreciated. Thank you for reading!

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
I Like

The fact that a couple can celebrate w/o others involved almost all stories on her with Anniversary in them are Cheaters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Precious

A refreshing change, a really special couple.

Thanks, keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Encore, encore

Great story. Waiting on chapter 2

butt_luvr68butt_luvr68over 12 years ago
No rust here

Just found you and this story. Very well written indeed. I can't wait to read others. My anniversary is the end of this month...can only hope it is something like this.

northlandernorthlanderover 12 years ago
Excellent

Lisa, It may be short, but you put your finger on what just about every guy I know would want on his anniversary. Good story, maybe could havve been fleshed out a little more, or it could be spun out into a series. How novel on Literotica, a man and wife enjoying each other

smc331smc331over 10 years ago
Amazing...

A married couple still very much in love, hot anniversary lovemaking - lovely. Would that all relationships could be like that!

It's awesome they haven't graduated to "hall sex"...you know...where the couple walks past each other in the hall and hollers "eff you!" ;-)

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 10 years ago
Another Beauty

So far so fucking good. I NEED to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
LOVE IT!!

This story is so amazing. It's hot and very loving. Please I beg you, can you make a part 2. PLEASE?

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 2 years ago

very good, second of yours I've read and didn't disappoint

Cal59Cal597 months ago

Short but sweet, excellent

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Thank you for reading my stories. :) My focus has shifted more to writing novels these days. If you're interested in following my work outside of Lit, you can find me on Amazon/Kindle under the pen name Elle Richards. I'm currently writing a post-apocalyptic romance series ca...