All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

No build up or details of how they end up in bed it would be "0" if I could

It was beautifully written!! The build up was not required as the sex description made up for everything. Great.

The tiny details, the little breaths, the short caresses, and the view of a character's emotion can make or break a story. This story had it all, and was beautifully written to draw the reader in, and bring her along on the journey. Very nicely done.

this was an enjoyable story of innocent intimacy. It reminded me of my first experience with my first boyfriend when I was in military training. I hope there are more stories to come.