All Comments on 'Happy Birthday Ch. 02'

A little over the top but STILL thought it was good! Love the descriptions of the ladies and those cock sucking lips! As I said "NIIIIIICE"!!

I found myself skimming over this story - it seemed as though you were trying to increase you word count, or trying out some new words.

Fantastic story so far, please next part ;)

Fantastic story, please continue! 5/5 so far !

It takes you 5 months to get from chapter 1 to 2, you haven't managed chapter 3 in the next 5 months, you pad your word count and STILL can't manage two full pages in a 'chapter'...and you fucking expect someone to PAY for this???

That's almost laughable in the level of insult that is. When you've learned to write proper stories, and produce a sufficient length that the chapters are worth the effort of reading them, you should try posting things here, again.

Paying...all I can say is, I hope the victim of your scam got his money back, at least.

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!

Congratulations, you just attracted the attention of the biggest, most obnoxious troll on this site, vastiesmith2/bonnietaylor2/Vac2 (all the same troll, don't be fooled) who auto-votes a 5 on any story that gets a 1* vote, and bad-mouths the original commenter; well done, you've reached your target audience, because only a troll could love this nonsense. Go back to your college/school and ask for your fees back, you got stiffed, because they didn't teach you shit. I would pay you to cart this garbage away and burn it, which is the only way you'd ever make a living as an "author". 1 star, and that's stretching a point.

Must have more!

Please for the love of God, More.

If it hasn't been picked up by the previous doner, How do I pay for it?

I have to agree with the other commenters that this really is not a story worth getting paid for. If I paid for a story and got these 2 chapters I'd be quite unhappy and want my money back.

Beautifully scenery and descriptions of the women. It’s so hot reading this.

I have no problem with the obviously ridiculous proportions, however, to have to read descriptions about its constantly gets old fast. It overshadows the story, detracting from it. This is the last chapter I’m willing to read.

Good story.