All Comments on 'Happy Birthday Sis!'

This was awesome! Hot as hell and erotic! 10!

You lost me at hairy arms.

That story is like a classic B-Movie: to equal parts good, idiotic and amateurish. I liked it. 4/5

For being drunk her speech is pretty coherent. I find that kind of interesting and does not fit the storyline all that well. That being said it is a good first effort but needs some fine tuning.

did you really need bathroom stuff to make a story? yeah, that's real erotic. definitely a 1 rating.

"another two turds dropped from her ass", and then a piss war? Yeah, real erotic.

I'd hope that they would carry on with their affair and become lovers, fucking every chance they get.

Thanks for the read

I liked your story, the way how they help each other.

They both need each other. I bet they'll repeat this story when ever they

have a chance.

I really like this story, especially the peeing!

It will save you a whole lot of time. Rated this a one and moved on.

I rate this a two, this wasn't that good until the end, like pissing on each other, just ehl

Good n hot but the pissing was gross, without that id be a 5/5, keep writing!

You dirty bastard!

wow, what a turn off

"I grabbed Gina and dragged her into the bathroom, dropped her on the floor in front of the toilet and lifted the lid. Gina immediately threw up barely making the toilet. The second time she threw up she wasn't as lucky. She got it in her hair and all over . . ."

"Gina shrieks, "Tony my stomach doesn't feel good, I have to shit!"

Suddenly, Gina quickly stood up turned around, pulled down her skirt and panties and just as she sat on the toilet a brown turd exited her ass. . .Her puke stained hair was covering her left breast . . Two more turds dropped from her ass then a clear stream of piss flowed out of her beautiful hairy pussy."

followed by pissing all over each before they finally remember to turn on the water in the shower.

this belongs in fetish.

The pissing, sick and shitting was odd, however the rest was really good. Some "but wait you're my sister/brother" lines would have been good as well 3/5

Wasn't real convining the first time but when you reported it with a different title it became even worse, so one star is all you get.

She seemed to sober up as soon as he stepped into the shower with her. First she can't even stand and then she's doing all kinds of physical activities in a slippery shower with no problems.

A deliciously well written chronicle! It's all in the details you use to describe the engaging characters personalities that makes the stories so riveting! It's only sHort coming is that it's too short... which is a good thing. Please continue this one as well! **

Interesting story and enjoyable reading. I was surprised sis didn't blow out her brother's candle. Keep up your nice writing.

Rather entertaining, lol. Brother would have put a quick hold on stroking him off with soap though! Every guy knows that soap burns like fuck when it gets in the tip, and somehow it always does if you use it to jack off... Now conditioner, on the other hand, is fucking magical ;)

Wish my brother would piss on my hairy pussy like that