All Comments on 'Happy Father's Day'

I am Ready for Round #2

Yes

But unless you put in how this came to be (how she decided to this; why now,; etc).

For now it's a *** but you can improve in that if you provide a background how it came to this point.

It's a short erotic story. Who cares how it came t be. It was a surprise. That's how. Keep it coming.

Very nice story - suspense, arousal, strong sexual action and then the surprise after ! I am sure Cindy will get her own present, when Daddy bangs her hard and well. More details of her fantasy and then his would be great. Nice story w/ much potential since there is an older daughter as well. Cannot wait to read more chapters soon thank you !!

4 stars from me, Now ready for next chapter. Possible 3-4 way?

Do you plan on continuing the lust crazed stories? there is so much potential.

Give Dad a sexy hairy chest for daughter to admire, taste, touch, caress.

Love a Father/Daughter story.

Chapter 2 will be even better

Thanks for sharing.