All Comments on 'Happy Holidays Ch. 01'

95%. If not for the name mistake mentioned previously, it would definitely get a 100%. Thanks for sharing this and hope to see more...

This is an excellent first effort. As you go you will get the bit of polish you need so don't worry about the one typo mentioned by someone else. I look forward to more stories from you.

I had to reread through the story to figure out where Ellen was even mentioned, minor error and not even worth mentioning in public. Sure, send you a private message to show it to you so you can correct it, but otherwise.

This was a great story. Can't wait for part 2. So many places to go.

Get real

Leave it up to a guitarist to end up walking away with the girl's panties ~ Hey - not a bad way to go. Loved this - but can the guy play a CM7? Hot! Sexy! A fun read!

Not a bad story, but it would have been much better if he had not been portrayed as such an arrogant obnoxious bastard. the Ct. Yankee

Musically speaking - close to a home run on the first tyme out.

Thanks with hope for more.

With Regard

Thanks for all your kind comments (and oops with the name change!). Chapter 02 is now up. Enjoy, and keep the comments coming!

Like the title says :). I'm looking forward for the other chapters.