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by Dave1984UK
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JJgreenvilleabout 6 years agoEnjoyed this very much...
...and I do hope there will be a follow-up as well.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoHaha!
I read your praise for your editor then started reading the story.
"Walt laid in bed and thought about just what a lucky son of a bitch he was."
The second word is wrong. Great start!
It is still littered with errors. God knows what it was like when it was unedited.
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