All Comments on 'Hard and Ready, Hot and Heavy'

I haven't read any of your other stories but this one describes what I consider a fairly routine and quaint sexual encounter. Except for the "oh yes, oh yes, oh fuck oh fuck oh fuck" it has a 'sex with the church lady' feeling. It's okay but it's not hot

This is an example of quaint:

"A few minutes later he asked if I minded him going home for the night. I told him of course not, because as much as I would've liked to have been able to go again, I knew I wouldn't walk right in the morning if we did."