by kylewhitney
The other chapters were really hot with him fucking his Mon, but this chapter all he got was watching. Too Bad that he didn't get to join in with mom and his Aunt. Thanks.....Rich
I loved reading this story, it is great just like the other 7 in this series. I hope you will continue writing it.
NOW U'VE GONE AND SPOILED IT ALL FOR ME.SHOULD'VE STUCK THE STORY TO JUST MOM AND SON.
WHAT A MESS....
This is good, love the change of pace. Kinky might mean some other things as well dont you think.
First of all, thanks to everyone who's stuck with the story this far. You're the ones who make the writing all worthwhile!
As for the pacing, I know that it is somewhat off in this chapter. They're going to be with Aunt Linda for the next two chapters, so it might feel uneven for a bit more. I plan on posting chapters 9 and 10 at the same time, hpefully this will help. If you're not crazy about these two playing with others, it'll be back to just mother and son in chapter 11.
Hope to see you there!
this is one of the hottest stories that I have read. I wish that I could be the one doing these wonderful things with my Mom and aunt!! I really want to see Mom doing more pee things.
I was loving this story when they were in the motel but its all getting a bit off track now, think i will come back when the aunt has gone..generally been very good though, well done
Keep writing and keep the characters on their current course of decent. Great read
The pace was certainly slower, but I felt that it needed to be. It hints at something even better to come. Sometimes going fast just screws things up. Take the time to allow the story to mature at its own pace. I like the story and look forward to reading more.
Lots of emotion, great sex dealt with humor is a rare combination. The story which is already very engaging becomes fun to read.
Of course...the whole family come from a long line of perverted fucks...Great story...