All Comments on 'Hard Times with Mom Ch. 08'

by kylewhitney

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Good but a little off of the pace

The other chapters were really hot with him fucking his Mon, but this chapter all he got was watching. Too Bad that he didn't get to join in with mom and his Aunt. Thanks.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good.

I loved reading this story, it is great just like the other 7 in this series. I hope you will continue writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
BADD...

NOW U'VE GONE AND SPOILED IT ALL FOR ME.SHOULD'VE STUCK THE STORY TO JUST MOM AND SON.

WHAT A MESS....

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Kyle, Dont worry about off pace or anything

This is good, love the change of pace. Kinky might mean some other things as well dont you think.

kylewhitneykylewhitneyover 14 years agoAuthor
Chapters 8, 9 and 10

First of all, thanks to everyone who's stuck with the story this far. You're the ones who make the writing all worthwhile!

As for the pacing, I know that it is somewhat off in this chapter. They're going to be with Aunt Linda for the next two chapters, so it might feel uneven for a bit more. I plan on posting chapters 9 and 10 at the same time, hpefully this will help. If you're not crazy about these two playing with others, it'll be back to just mother and son in chapter 11.

Hope to see you there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice touch

nice touch in the story, keep writing

oldpmoldpmover 14 years ago
wish it was my Mom!!

this is one of the hottest stories that I have read. I wish that I could be the one doing these wonderful things with my Mom and aunt!! I really want to see Mom doing more pee things.

blackfenblackfenover 14 years ago
get back to basics

I was loving this story when they were in the motel but its all getting a bit off track now, think i will come back when the aunt has gone..generally been very good though, well done

floaturboatfloaturboatover 14 years ago
Nice twisted turn of events!

Keep writing and keep the characters on their current course of decent. Great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Slower Pace

The pace was certainly slower, but I felt that it needed to be. It hints at something even better to come. Sometimes going fast just screws things up. Take the time to allow the story to mature at its own pace. I like the story and look forward to reading more.

clark3001clark3001over 14 years ago
I love the way this story is written !

Lots of emotion, great sex dealt with humor is a rare combination. The story which is already very engaging becomes fun to read.

David48David48almost 14 years ago
Well Duh...

Of course...the whole family come from a long line of perverted fucks...Great story...

NovaMNovaMover 2 years ago

Kinky = good 😊

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