All Comments on 'Hard Work the Hard Way'

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JD2100JD2100over 8 years ago
loved it

yeah i liked it and it was a good start but was a little short there. I would have loved to see more there and hope to see chapter two and maybe a longer story where you delve more into details and describing more of the enviroment and what you are wearing when you put it on and so on. But I was very aroused and it was a good start and I do hope to see more so please continue.

productdesignguyproductdesignguyover 8 years ago
Long Beach fantasy

I live in Long Beach, have yet to across such a situation but man I would love too. Totally gave me a vivid fantasy. Thank you.

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