by Fiona10
yeah i liked it and it was a good start but was a little short there. I would have loved to see more there and hope to see chapter two and maybe a longer story where you delve more into details and describing more of the enviroment and what you are wearing when you put it on and so on. But I was very aroused and it was a good start and I do hope to see more so please continue.
I live in Long Beach, have yet to across such a situation but man I would love too. Totally gave me a vivid fantasy. Thank you.