All Comments on 'Hardest Choice Ch. 01'

The guy gets his first time the afternoon before.

Now, he asks his younger sister about anal less than 24 hours?

Yup, Yup, Yup, it's fantasy world.

Very good first story ... can'y wait for part 2 now.

can we have some more?

Very hot! The next chapter must come soon!

Please keep going, because I feel that you have real talent and I hope to see it blossom!

Soon! ;-)

Wow can't wait for part 2. Keep it comming.

That is one of the best stories I have read so far. You have some serious talent.

until you got to the anal thing. I guess you think you have to have an anal scene, no matter how far outside the story line it is. Well, guess what: some of us DON'T LIKE ANAL. If I wanted to read about a guy ramming his prick into a girl's shithole, there's a section for it. I don't go there. That leaves out the part that yesterday he was a virgin, and didn't seem to be knowledgeable about sex; when did he learn about it? And of course a girl that is a virgin is going to just love having a prick in her ass, just like all girls seem to have a taste for shit. [BTW, how did she have a hymen if she had been using a dildo? Oh, I forgot, she's some kind of freak, with her hymen "several inches" in from her pussy entrance, not just inside, like most girls. Or maybe the virgins I've had, not that there have been that many, were the freaks in there pussy structure.] I'm sorry, but while the story started in a complete fantasy, it was pretty good until the asses came into it. After that, if you'll parden the pun, it was shit.

you went anal! did not add anything sexual or erotic,,,just cheapened it,,too bad!

Too bad he didn't suck his little sister off before taking her cherry. That would have been some sweet pussy.

Thanks for the read.

you have no idea how a virgin guy would react as soon as she took off her top and especially when she put his hand on her tit he would have got out of the car and started to walk home NO MATTER HOW FAR IT WAS. EITHER KEEP IT BELIEVABLE OR DON'T POST IT AT ALL.

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"Actually, big brother, I prefer this position." And she lay down, spread her legs in front of him with the dildo still inserted, and slowly began to fuck herself with her dildo in front of his face. He couldn't help it; he moaned.

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Fuuuuuuck, I love his little sister!! (And his oldest sister too!!!;)

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Slowly and gently, he guided his head inside her. She moaned and closed her eyes. He kept going, slowly, gently, and it was a torment to him. He wanted to ram her, to fuck her so hard her head hit the headboard. But he needed to go easy on her, so he did. He continued pushing as lightly as he could, and soon he was up against her hymen. She whimpered a little, anticipating pain. With one smooth easy push, he popped her cherry.

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Omg, another author that has no fucking clue where the hymen is or how its built!

First off she doesnt have one! If shes fucking herself with a dildo then that fucker is long torn and gone!

Second, the hymen is at the front of the vagina. He isnt sliding his dick inside of jack-shit till he gets past her hymen. (Rolling eyes). ...why cant authors just google shit that they dont know about?! Sigh. Just fucking totally ruins the whole scene!!

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He pulled out his fingers. He spied a bottle of lotion and slathered some on his thick long hard rod. He also took a dollop and placed it on her hole, making her shiver in delight and anticipation.

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Well at least he uses lube for the anal scene, lol. Though Im surprised near virgin boy would even suggest it this soon after losing his cherry. ...anyway, no fucking way he shoved three fingers in her ass without lube without her hurting like fuck, even if he did work them in one at a time! Dry is dry and dry hurts, burns and tears skin!!

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She pulled him down on top of her again and kissed him slowly, leisurely. They stayed there for about an hour, kissing and dozing, admiring each other. Then they heard a car pull in the driveway, and Brad grabbed his boxers and bolted into his room.

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It was still pretty hot though, all in all! Boy has some forward ass sisters, hehehe ;). ...the twins next, or mom? Lol.

I always laugh when the girl always loves anal... I guess you have to expect it since its a story written for that purpose... Would be funny to read something different though;

'How does it feel sis?' "...oh Robby... It hurts some...and it feels like Ive gotta go shit really bad!" Hehehe.