All Comments on 'Harem Country Ch. 01'

Lease do more fr this series it has slot of potential

Ton of potential here. One quibble though, I cannot see a head of a religious order ever referring to his followers as a "cult". In our culture not only does the word imply small size (definitely not world wide ), but the followers are perceived as being simple minded. I believe a deity would refer to his adherents as his church, followers, the faithful, his children or something similar. Since he seems too be a militaristic god he could even call them his army, his host or his force. Just a suggestion.

This is really good, please keep up the great work. This series has so much opportunity to be something great, to be a landmark for this website. 10/10

Very, very good!!!! More please!

Great story. hope to see it through to the end. Also hope to see you pick up Crusade Gone Awry again, loved that story and want to see how it ends.

Hey man, just informing you. Someone has been stealing this story and posting it on AO3.

https://www.archiveofourown.org/works/23590942/chapters/57380143#workskin