by Tater_Chips
This is the only erotica, or porn in general, that I am reading for the plot. Keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Great smut and a great story? Incredible work. I can't wait for the next update!
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I love the whole secret cult thing going on with the wine. very dark cult.
Great chapter. I loved how long it was. Please keep writing and do not be discouraged by naysayers. I'm a big fan of your stories.
I cannot believe that every time a man has a fantasy, he wants to dominate, fuck and humiliate women. Why are me so threatened by women? Poor sick pathetic men. You shallow thing wants what you know you cant get.
Dotan chacther has felt someone who's been held down by the past. His mobther abounding him and his aunt hated him. They make fill sad for him I hope can shove someone who will the MC for he his everyone needs someone in there life.
This is an incredible series, one of the best written ones on the entire site. The characters are engaging, the world interesting, everything about it makes me want to read more, to see Dotan succeed in his plan and see it all to fruition.
People who fail to understand how fantasy works, nor that they don't get a say in other people's fantasies because it's not their business, shouldn't put you off writing. Your talent is solid and I would gladly buy this as a book.
please keep writing this series it's really good. I hate to say this but I have to the goddesses got what they deserved treating half the population like second class citizens that were lucky that the goddesses let them live. if they had been treated fairly and equally to women the take over wouldn't have happened.
Love the story!! I feel there is at least one more chapter. Will there be more?
Great story, loved every part. It's a shame that you stopped here, you writing is excellent!