All Comments on 'Harnessing Fire Ch. 04'

I can't wait for the other chapter! This story is so awesome! :)

so glad you picked the story back up!

Great story!

Good that you continue writing, it's really worth it, thank you!

Please keep up with this, I cannot wait! I love the characters and potential for this story. It has great build up too. :D

I like this new turn of events! Plus I'm glad you picked it back up. Please continue!

Hi, me again. As I said before I thought the plot was great and you had a unique twist to your story but boy oh boy does this blow it out of the water! I mean talk about plot twist! It's wishful thinking but I really hope you come back to finish the story. There's so many ways this can go and I'm eager to see which you choose. Again I hope this comment finds you and perhaps reignites your passion for the story.