by denizkizi
the cigarette fetish you seem to have. Sorry, that ruined the story for me...
agree with the poster below me. I didn't realize until now that reading about someone smoking a cigarette is just as disgusting as watching someone smoke one. Otherwise it seems like the story is carrying on great.
I loved it! I always love stories with guys who are tough, alpha males but still can have a caring side to them. He is obviously going to have her regardless of how she feels, but you can tell that he does has feelings for her. Otherwise he would have just beaten and took her when he finally found her.
Keep up the good work.
p.s. Freya`s story is awesome!!
I notice some comments about the smoking. I'm a recovering smoker (ha ha), and so yeah, reading about her dragging in the smoke was not pleasant. But that's just because the urge to smoke can be triggered too easy! <br><br>
On to the story - very hot! Great job!
This is the best story I have read here in a LONG time!! Please give us some really good angst before Seth wins her over. there is nothing I love more in a love story........
WRITE MORE!!!
great start :)
Yes i want you to continue your other story "Trading of Freya", but this is going to be a great collection. I just know it. So please continue (With both stories please)
I like that Harriet isn't just property to Seth but that he actually cares about and maybe even loves her. It's fun to read the tension between the two of them! Can't wait to see how Seth wins her over. There also seems to be something going on between Juliet and Alex too. Please continue with this story. Thanks!