All Comments on 'Harriet and The Wolf'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
please continue

I hope that you plan on continuing this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Love it!

please update soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Oh my!

Very nice story. Please do continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I enjoyed everything but

the cigarette fetish you seem to have. Sorry, that ruined the story for me...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Completely

agree with the poster below me. I didn't realize until now that reading about someone smoking a cigarette is just as disgusting as watching someone smoke one. Otherwise it seems like the story is carrying on great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome!!!!

I loved it! I always love stories with guys who are tough, alpha males but still can have a caring side to them. He is obviously going to have her regardless of how she feels, but you can tell that he does has feelings for her. Otherwise he would have just beaten and took her when he finally found her.

Keep up the good work.

p.s. Freya`s story is awesome!!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 16 years ago
ooh

I'm quite intrigued. Can't wait to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Really great beginning

I notice some comments about the smoking. I'm a recovering smoker (ha ha), and so yeah, reading about her dragging in the smoke was not pleasant. But that's just because the urge to smoke can be triggered too easy! <br><br>

On to the story - very hot! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Start!

This is the best story I have read here in a LONG time!! Please give us some really good angst before Seth wins her over. there is nothing I love more in a love story........

WRITE MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I love it and

great start :)

Yes i want you to continue your other story "Trading of Freya", but this is going to be a great collection. I just know it. So please continue (With both stories please)

starry_nightstarry_nightabout 16 years ago
Interesting start!

I like that Harriet isn't just property to Seth but that he actually cares about and maybe even loves her. It's fun to read the tension between the two of them! Can't wait to see how Seth wins her over. There also seems to be something going on between Juliet and Alex too. Please continue with this story. Thanks!

whitesabretoothwhitesabretoothabout 16 years ago
Awesome

I hope you continue, i like this story, it's beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This story is so amazing! I am hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more write more

i like this story a lot i wish you would continue it

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