All Comments on 'Harriet'

by Kirk482002

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Now I'm bummed!!!

Kirk,

What's a girl have to do to get the "family secret" out of you, huh?

I've got a pretty nice set, too...but alas, not magical!

Maybe I should start a rock collection - yeah, that's it!!! That's the answer... right?... RIGHT?????????

Once again, another "magical" journey into a very talented writer's mind!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
What a riot!

That was fucking hysterical! It was very easy to visualize the images you painted. You have a real talent for injecting bits of true comedy into your story. You should try writing for television or film.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great change of pace

Very funny story. Try writing a pure comedy, you have the talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting Concept 4*

I like the concept, but I can only give 4* for a 1 pager. I would hope you could add a second chapter with at least two pages. Something like what happened between them in the years in between this story's timeline. Still I liked it.

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