by Kirk482002
Kirk,
What's a girl have to do to get the "family secret" out of you, huh?
I've got a pretty nice set, too...but alas, not magical!
Maybe I should start a rock collection - yeah, that's it!!! That's the answer... right?... RIGHT?????????
Once again, another "magical" journey into a very talented writer's mind!!!
That was fucking hysterical! It was very easy to visualize the images you painted. You have a real talent for injecting bits of true comedy into your story. You should try writing for television or film.
Very funny story. Try writing a pure comedy, you have the talent.
I like the concept, but I can only give 4* for a 1 pager. I would hope you could add a second chapter with at least two pages. Something like what happened between them in the years in between this story's timeline. Still I liked it.